From 9a2c1355ec53838f627b8c85d25fab582ec44a60 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: K3v123 <123932560+K3v123@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Nov 2024 01:47:41 +1300
Subject: [PATCH] translation: Update index.md (#1548)

* translation: Update index.md

refined some parts of the sentences.

changed 'in' to 'on' as it conveys a sense of movement along a path

* translation: Update index.md

changed some words per Thomas's suggestions.
---
 en/docs/chapter_searching/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/docs/chapter_searching/index.md b/en/docs/chapter_searching/index.md
index f8e3b8bc8..cf8ac7f2f 100644
--- a/en/docs/chapter_searching/index.md
+++ b/en/docs/chapter_searching/index.md
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 
 !!! abstract
 
-    Searching is an unknown adventure, where we may need to traverse every corner of a mysterious space, or perhaps quickly pinpoint our target.
+    Searching is an adventure into the unknown; where we may need to traverse every corner of a mysterious space, or perhaps we’ll quickly locate our target.
     
-    In this journey of discovery, each exploration may yield an unexpected answer.
+    On this journey of discovery, each exploration may end up with an unexpected answer.